Ok so what do you think about the new lay-out? Much better isn't it? The only thing I can comment in here is still based on the choice of your typo for the main title. Unreadable!!! Ok I know it is a funny font and works with the subject but the sylt eis really to different than the meaning of this article. Decorative font it is not really a good choice. Try something else, maybe a font as script fammilly, that by the curves of the letter can have a better connection with feminity, sexuality, sweet as a flower etc. ok see u this morning.
Ok so what do you think about the new lay-out? Much better isn't it?
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I can comment in here is still based on the choice of your typo for the main title. Unreadable!!! Ok I know it is a funny font and works with the subject but the sylt eis really to different than the meaning of this article. Decorative font it is not really a good choice.
Try something else, maybe a font as script fammilly, that by the curves of the letter can have a better connection with feminity, sexuality, sweet as a flower etc.
ok see u this morning.
Ok so If you really want to improve, change the Main title by other fonts, and don't extend it until the edge boarder.
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