Hello! This post has just been created based on Gestalt theory. I tried to use and apply the theory which i was traught in class to this one. I hope to receive your feedback to realize what mistakes that i make. Thank you!
Ok first, it looks good but it needs to be improve. Remember ''Less Is More''. Actually there is a lot of elements. First of all, change your background, to much details so it is not easy to read and it is really bad quality (resolution) The first job of a graphic designer is to be readable, be careful of the spelling>>> Plants and not Plans. Change the typography of the main title, use only one font and reorder it. Don't hesitate to use different opacity (pictures, graphics) What it would be interesting is too use the text wrap to place the paragraph around the pictures. Actually the text is too much cutting out and you have to align it. Maybe create columns? I guess you can increase the margins to let more space between the paragraphs and the boarders of the page. You can delete the picture at the bottom left corner, not a good placement and it would let your design breaths. You can use the black squares to support the texts. I mean to place them under the text to help the reading. Or you can delete them all (squares & circles) and use the block texts and the different flower pictures as primary elements. Conceptually the block texts represent the square group and the pictures the other group. Redo the exercise on this way, and compare you 2 works. Keep Going!
Ok first, it looks good but it needs to be improve.
ReplyDeleteRemember ''Less Is More''. Actually there is a lot of elements. First of all, change your background, to much details so it is not easy to read and it is really bad quality (resolution)
The first job of a graphic designer is to be readable, be careful of the spelling>>> Plants and not Plans. Change the typography of the main title, use only one font and reorder it. Don't hesitate to use different opacity (pictures, graphics) What it would be interesting is too use the text wrap to place the paragraph around the pictures. Actually the text is too much cutting out and you have to align it. Maybe create columns? I guess you can increase the margins to let more space between the paragraphs and the boarders of the page. You can delete the picture at the bottom left corner, not a good placement and it would let your design breaths. You can use the black squares to support the texts. I mean to place them under the text to help the reading. Or you can delete them all (squares & circles) and use the block texts and the different flower pictures as primary elements. Conceptually the block texts represent the square group and the pictures the other group. Redo the exercise on this way, and compare you 2 works.
Keep Going!