Dear teacher!!
Today i going to post the next work that i created. As introduced in class, i did exercise for arranging the text in a magazine. Mostly, i based on the poster that you showed in class on Wednesday. The layout looks like slightly the same but i also made some changes so that it does not got the exact same. I hope receiving your feedback so that i can realize what i did wrong on this post.
Best regards,
Try to re-check for the text alignment (left-right align or justify), you can improve the space for the right margin (too small), think to align properly the different elements, I mean the Carhartt logo at the bottom left corner should be aligns with the line formed by dots (the underline element) etc.
ReplyDeleteYou forgot to add a period at the text-end. The insert of the orange text is a good issue but try to justify it.
Missing the basic shape brand name of CARHARTT started to be developed in class a week ago.
Anyway it looks good, keep on goin'!
ps. maybe try to use the negative issue to design the departure of the text. I mean replace the orange triangle by the number 1 in negative. Why not? Let's try it.
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